The start is very gay, and you look to have Simon Cowell pants on, maybe try not tucking the shirt in, apart from that, the riding ain’t that bad I suppose, although you look like your trying too hard to style everything up, try not tweaking the bars on every jump, ‘gets a bit cringeworthy after a bit’, 😉 your not too bad around the berms although you do seem to scrub the speed on the way out of them, again I think it’s cos your trying too hard and can sometimes look a bit unstable, also don’t try doing manuals until you can do them! 😉
Hope this helps, I look forward to seeing your next vid. 😀