Right, listened to it now 🙂
Definitely work on your precision on the guitar. Get a drum machine maybe and have something light going on in the background whilst you practice?
And the accent.. sounds a bit like you’re trying to be Texan but you might be from Northern Ireland which would work. Been listening to Snow Patrol much? 🙂
My advice would be
1) Practice the guitar part – hard.
2) Use a capo – 3 frets would ease your voice up a fair bit but still keep the low easy style.
3) Really concentrate on singing in your own voice. Fake accents really bug me, and you end up sounding really refreshing. Personally it’s a joy to my ears to hear someone’s real voice, not some identikit American accent. It’s surprisingly difficult to do actually, cos we’ve been listening to popular music sung the same way for so long.
4) Use more air when you sing, if that makes sense.
NB I am not an accomplished musician so I might be talking rubbish.
I do like the song though quite a lot. Reminds me of something that I can’t place.