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  • Should Kids Picnic be Kid's Picnic or Kids' Picnic, or just Kids Picnic !?
  • the-muffin-man
    Full Member

    Just doing a menu board for a local cafe and this has caused some thought!

    To put it in context the item ‘Kids Picnic’ is a box of 4 food items that the child can choose from.

    Cheers!

    joao3v16
    Free Member

    Kids Picnic

    IHN
    Full Member

    Well, for a start, unless they’re feeding baby goats, it should be child/children, not kid/kids.

    On the assumption that the item is aimed at an individual child, it would be Kid’s Picnic.

    Kids picnic

    johnellison
    Free Member

    How about “Picnic for Minors”?

    Cougar
    Full Member

    It’s a picnic belonging to kids, so it’s a kids’ picnic. Cf. “children’s menu”.

    IHN
    Full Member

    The fact that they want to use the word ‘kids’ rather than ‘children’ probably implies that they don’t give a toss about correct apostropherical usage anyway.

    dabble
    Free Member

    Ankle biters bites

    Cougar
    Full Member

    apostropherical

    Was that as hard for you to spell as it was for me to just try and pronounce?

    IHN
    Full Member

    I’ll admit, it took a couple of goes 🙂

    KonaTC
    Full Member

    Rule 4 Applies

    To show plural possession, make the noun plural first. Then immediately use the apostrophe.

    Examples:
    two boys’ hats two women’s hats
    two actresses’ hats
    two children’s hats
    the Changs’ house
    the Joneses’ golf clubs
    the Strauses’ daughter
    the Sanchezes’ artwork
    the Hastingses’ appointment
    the Leeses’ books

    Shirley by default; the Kids’ picnic. As the picnic belongs to the kids

    There’s a difference between not being grammatically uptight and not caring about using the correct punctuation.

    kennyp
    Free Member

    Should it not be kids’ picnics ie picnics belonging to more than one kid. Alternatively children’s picnics because the plural of child doesn’t end with an s?

    Cougar
    Full Member

    There’s a difference between not being grammatically uptight and not caring about using the correct punctuation.

    Are you new here?

    the-muffin-man
    Full Member

    Sod it, they’re having Kids Picnic – that’s what they have approved!

    irelanst
    Free Member

    I’m going for Kid’s picnic, singular possesive.

    If you go for Kids’ picnic then you risk someone wanting picnics for all his kids for the price indicated on the menu.

    Cougar
    Full Member

    There’s a logical argument for all three, thinking about it.

    It’s a picnic for children, as opposed to a picnic for adults, so I believe kids’ is correct, as I said earlier.

    The picnic itself is singular, so it would be a kid’s picnic.

    If you can have an adult menu, you can have a kids menu.

    On reflection, I’d say that it’s more important to be consistent throughout. Are there other similar menu quandaries?

    hels
    Free Member

    I believe the convention in signwriting is not to use punctuation, so Kids Picnic. But they sound like the kind of people who might go for Kidz Picnic so try that…

    I think the possessive apostrophe should be outlawed as an anachronism, the only real purpose it has in the modern world is to demonstrate that people are either really stupid or went to a very very poor school. It isn’t even funny any more. (and that was a contraction you pedants)

    miketually
    Free Member

    Each picnic is for one child, so it’s a “Kid’s Picnic”.

    Sod it, they’re having Kids Picnic – that’s what they have approved!

    No apostrophes is always better than an incorrect one.

    the-muffin-man
    Full Member

    Argh! – just been told the actual wording is Kids Picnics – on reflection I think I’ll try and get them to go with Kid’s Picnic

    Cougar
    Full Member

    Is this a single item on a long menu?

    Bacon butty
    Toasted teacake
    Kid’s picnic
    Armadillo

    Bacon butties
    Toasted teacakes
    Kids’ picnics
    Armadillos

    Be consistent.

    IHN
    Full Member

    Kids’ Picnics

    BUT IT SHOULD BE CHILDREN’S! Grr 👿

    Dorset_Knob
    Free Member

    This thread got it right, then it went off on a wrong track and confused itself with talk of singular or plurual picnics, which is irrelevant.

    So to put it right again: Kids’ Picnics

    You shouldn’t just drop the apostrophe because you don’t know how to use it.

    Dorset_Knob
    Free Member

    BUT IT SHOULD BE CHILDREN’S! Grr

    Disagree. Nothing wrong with ‘kids’ – denotes fun and informality and a break from having to be strictly correct and follow rules: just right for a picnic.

    IHN
    Full Member

    Disagree.

    We shall have to agree to.

    Dorset_Knob
    Free Member

    To put it in context the item ‘Kids Picnic’ is a box of 4 food items that the child can choose from.

    haha, just read that. I’m not so sure now.

    If it was kid’s picnics, wouldn’t that mean that the picnics were for just one kid – the manager’s son, perhaps – and not any kid who wanted one.

    But kids’ picnics shows that the picnics are for any and all kids who might pass by.

    So Kids’ Picnics is still correct, and so am I.

    Dorset_Knob
    Free Member

    We shall have to agree to [disagree].

    Bert? This bloke says he won’t argue!

    rocketman
    Free Member

    There’s a car on our car park with a sticker on the back that says
    Old Fords’s Never Die

    IHN
    Full Member

    Sorry, I can’t hear you from all the way up here on the moral high ground 🙂

    Cougar
    Full Member

    There’s a car on our car park with a sticker on the back that says
    Old Fords’s Never Die

    Is the driver Gollum?

    I used to work in Wolverhampton for my sins. I wanted to hurt people in the cafe of a morning, asking for two breakfasts’s and a cup o tay.

    rocketman
    Free Member

    I’m not sure – technically – what it means 🙂

    Does it mean that several people named Fords never die?

    Ecky-Thump
    Free Member

    I’m with cougar on this.
    …on second thoughts, have we determined if the content of the picnic (singular) is for one kid or for a multitude? [runs for cover]

    [edit] too slow 🙁 [/edit]

    patriotpro
    Free Member

    Easy: Kids’ picnic.

    Cougar
    Full Member

    WRT “fords’s” and “breakfasts’s” it’s possibly a little CDO of me but I itch when I see otherwise professional menus advertising “paninis”.

    DezB
    Free Member

    I’m going for Kid’s picnic, singular possesive.

    I agree with this, although grammatical advice from someone who can’t spell possessive is a bit of a concern.

    ransos
    Free Member

    If it’s a single item item on a menu like “ham sandwich” then it should be “kid’s picnic”. A picnic for more than one child would be “kids’ picnic”.

    I don’t see a problem with using a commonly used, informal word meaning “child”.

    dknwhy
    Full Member

    Is it right to worry about the possessive when the picnic is not owned by the child? The cafe are advertising the fact that a picnic is available for kids but legally still owned by the cafe as they are advertising in the hope that a purchase will occur and thus form a contract with an intended buyer.
    I think the safest option is to probably opt for:

    Available for purchase: a picnic aimed (but not entirely restricted to) a younger demographic.

    irelanst
    Free Member

    I agree with this, although grammatical advice from someone who can’t spell possessive is a bit of a concern.

    I can, I just didn’t 😀

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