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[Closed] Please feel free to critique my 'Just Giving' page.

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It's pretty bad, so any advice would be welcomed, I know there are probably grammatical errors and everything.
In order to really rub it in you could always donate three quid, to tell all my family and friends how rubbish it is.
Alternatively you could point out what a lame challenge it is, maybe you commute this distance each day.
Really £3 isn't much in order to feel really good about yourself by showing me up in front of my loved ones.

http://www.justgiving.com/jason-komodikisc2c


 
Posted : 31/03/2014 5:53 pm
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For some reason the page isn't allowing donations?
I've tried by mobile and by computer, not having it...


 
Posted : 31/03/2014 5:55 pm
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Working now. 😉


 
Posted : 31/03/2014 6:12 pm
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You sir, are awesome.
I don't think anyone can better that comment, I really don't.


 
Posted : 31/03/2014 6:21 pm
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Thanks Leffe


 
Posted : 31/03/2014 6:57 pm
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Thanks JV


 
Posted : 31/03/2014 8:39 pm
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Cheers Sean


 
Posted : 01/04/2014 6:01 am
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Duly "critiqued". Have fun!


 
Posted : 01/04/2014 10:17 am
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Thanks!


 
Posted : 01/04/2014 10:58 am
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Grammar duly critiqued 🙂
Good luck!


 
Posted : 01/04/2014 11:05 am
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Cheers CC, your the best at grammar.
Many thanks.


 
Posted : 01/04/2014 11:41 am
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Cheers anon


 
Posted : 01/04/2014 8:01 pm
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Pleasure.

🙂


 
Posted : 01/04/2014 9:48 pm
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Looks okay to me!
Good luck... 😉


 
Posted : 01/04/2014 9:56 pm
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Thanks Grtdkad!


 
Posted : 02/04/2014 5:30 am
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Over the £100 mark and only a gentle ribbing so far.
You are all too kind.


 
Posted : 02/04/2014 11:06 am
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Well done, all the best.


 
Posted : 02/04/2014 11:30 am
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Thanks JKing!


 
Posted : 02/04/2014 7:55 pm
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Ooof, had a couple of biggees, however stw massive still beats my own family into a cocked hat.


 
Posted : 04/04/2014 3:04 pm
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Thanks anon


 
Posted : 06/04/2014 7:29 am
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I've had another check... still looks good tbh


 
Posted : 06/04/2014 6:27 pm
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Feeling inspired by the marathon


 
Posted : 13/04/2014 1:02 pm