If you assume it’s a parody of a language, I can see why some may see it as a bit uncomfortable.
But it isn’t, it’s a real spoken language and if there’s a ‘parody’ it’s because languages i suppose were never meant to be written down (or another way, existed as a spoken form way before there was any need or means to convey actual words as opposed to ideas or broad concepts) It’s no more parody than attempting to write cockney, or geordie, y’knaa.
My sister lived on Antigua for a bit and I used to love reading the island’s newspaper. The articles were in ‘perfect’ english, but particularly court transcripts were still written in dialect (lickle instead of little, and so on) reflecting what people actually said. That’s what this is, don’t see it as parody, enjoy the absolute poetic nature!