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[Closed] What do you think of my new dirt jump video?

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Hi
Just put out a new video that i have made that is part of a short series that i am making bought some local dirt jumps, and i thought i would see what the amazing people of the STW forum thought of it ๐Ÿ™‚

Here the link to the vimeo page:

Thanks


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 11:57 am
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I like it. Will be interested in seeing the further episodes.

Few constructive criticisms....

you only seem to use one type of shot (pan), maybe chuck some tilts in there. Still shots also look nice too.

Edit to the music, and use better music than that LaRoux. She can't sing man!

Other than that, good. Oh, I like the graphics and titles too.


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:03 pm
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Nice one, enjoyed it. Feel a bit dizzy mind, maybe edit a few more stationary shots to break up the pans a bit? Definitely be interested to see the next installment.


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:04 pm
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thanks, any comments are useful comments, i no what you mean bought the panning, i will stick some differnet shots in next episode, if the MAN hasn't knocked them down. but i do think that the music work with the vid, although there will be a new track for the next episode.


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:05 pm
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LaRoux's new single?
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Posted : 28/05/2009 12:16 pm
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You seem to have dug small two lumps! I hope Episode 2 feaures something a bit more exciting.


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:17 pm
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La Roux- In For The Kill
good song 8)


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:18 pm
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yer of course thats just the start, and that is just a rolin and the pump, we are building the jumps at the moment and so will be featured in episode 2 ๐Ÿ™‚


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:20 pm
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i like this one
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Posted : 28/05/2009 12:34 pm
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very nice, like the diversity of the shots ๐Ÿ™‚


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:45 pm
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Dizzy............got bored so I switched it off, should be more dynamic for a jump film, nice quality images/eposure tho,


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:51 pm
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Some of the speeded-up stampy-feet bits worked quite well I thought. As has been said, it's all a bit spinny. Nice vibe though, even if nothing happens.

Bloody La Roux. She ain't no Little Boots 8)


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 12:59 pm
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hmm...okay :-), i will take that as constructive critism ๐Ÿ™‚


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 1:00 pm
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nice lighting and like the song.

take care of the tree roots and the MAN should be ok, i hope. oh and take litter home. don't let the site end up looking like most DJ sites where they resemble the local drinks/cans, wrappers and crisp packet collection site.

good work.


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 1:02 pm
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yeh, i now what ur saying. this is really useful, because i can use this to improve episode 2 ๐Ÿ™‚


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 1:04 pm
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Good quality video but the panning shots seem to be experiencing some frame rate conversion which means every few frames it jumps and doesn't pan smoothly. You just need to figure out how to get rid of the jumping in your jumping video. Otherwise really good.


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 8:34 pm
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thanks very much :-), the problem is that the frame rate is quite slow on my camera, because it is just a normal compact camera ( i am hoping to upgrade in the summer), so if i slow the frames down even more it can give off that jumpy effect. also the internet can cause it to be jumpy as well, plus video card etc ๐Ÿ™‚


 
Posted : 28/05/2009 9:12 pm