Using half your clip to show you pushing a bike up through the woods does not make for a very engaging video. The bits after that look pretty good for a first go but I was already a bit bored by the whole thing by the time the riding had started. Had you dumped the first 60 seconds it would have been much better.
Initially I compiled and edited the riding footage, then I added music and due to the building nature of the the track felt the need to ‘pad’ the beginning with ‘a little bit of pushing’. equally it could have bveen wheel truing, stoking the sauna or a funeral! (see relevent Chromag and Cotic videos for reference)
I liked the music and felt that it was building and that it might suddenly crescendo,coinciding with some lairy riding, but it didn’t.
The riding started and the music was still building. It’s really nice if you can punctuate ‘events’ with musical events and shows complete attention to detail.
Music was nice but yeah, it needed some diversity to tie in with the diversity of the images.
I’d echo comments about the pushing. Too much of it.
Great vid if it’s your first try though. Nice not to see comic sans and spinning graphics etc.
Chalk have you taken the video down? Clicked on the link and it said video deleted.
I always make edits too long and then when I did make one shorter my mates complained that there wasn’t enough riding in it – even though I wanted to capture most of the holiday we had rather than just trails.
I guess as long as you are happy with it then some people out there will like it, after all you can’t please everyone – I heard some people slagging Guardians of the Galaxy the other day (mental!).