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Seeing the 140 character stories in the Sat Guardian and thinking of Hemmingways 5 word story. I thought we could try a new game.
Each post a story but with one less character than the one before. That includes spaces.

Wanna play? Next post will be my 140 character opener

Be nice


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 5:53 pm
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I woke, a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small voice spoke "Are you Mummy's friend?", "No" I say "Not any more".


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 5:56 pm
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This won't go well, but heck.

I woke, a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small vice spoke "Are you Mummy's friend?", "No" I say "Not any more".


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 6:03 pm
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I woke, a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small vice spoke "Are you Mummy's fiend?", "No" I say "Not any more".

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They really did look like ants from the clocktower.
The telescopic sight was a mistake. Too much perspective.
Bollocks to it. Maybe tomorrow.


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 6:14 pm
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I woke a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small vice spoke "Are you Mummy's fiend?", "No" I say "Not any more".


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 6:17 pm
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Actually, i meant for you to write a new story, but this might work!


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 7:09 pm
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I did!
But 138, instead of 137 if you take out the unecessary space. ๐Ÿ™

Will try again later.


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 7:11 pm
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I woke a boy beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small vice spoke "Are you Mummy's fiend?", "No" I say "Not any more"


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 7:17 pm
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Oh dear...collective fail!


 
Posted : 09/02/2013 8:10 pm