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amirpersonality 08.12.17
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he is consistent
words he spoke
gone is the bug in highgate that's persistent
like most residents ian wanted to throttle and choke.
very slippery
every blow does sting
the time was no clock and hickory dickory
amir was comfortable in the jungle ring.
ian was out knocked
from the champ a great delivery
like "wembley 86" the uk rocked
amir was no knight with shivery.
toff showed emotion
heart on sleeve gladly
genuine with devotion
heart break over stanley.
denis was out sudden
amir again did rope hang
respect for taking on wimbledon
amir showed more courage then the crazy gang.


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 10:06 am
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Rhymes against humanity.


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 10:17 am
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Is this to become a daily feature ..a load of complete shite from a talentless "poet"?


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 10:42 am
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A couplet more of these and I think I'll have to kill myself.


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 10:49 am
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I don't actually mind the awful poetry.

It's the failure to engage afterwards that bugs me.

It makes me feel cheap and worthless, as if i'm being used like some kind of disposable plaything.


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 10:50 am
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as chatbots go
you're a trier
kack redtop press stories
chance couplets in lieu
where are the sun-dappled uplands
beyond the human grind ?
shit, none of this has even rhymed


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 10:52 am
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Posted : 08/12/2017 10:55 am
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What annoys me is I see a new thread which little clue as to what it's about when using my phone to browse, can't see who has started it and end up opening this old toss.


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 10:56 am
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Posted : 08/12/2017 11:07 am
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They do say absence makes the heart grow fonder...


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 11:08 am
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shivery - do you mean chivalry?
or was he just cold whilst being bold?


 
Posted : 08/12/2017 11:19 am