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[Closed] Rant content (fairly average)

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So why does teh rutland cyclin online shop tell me an item is instock and available to by but then they send me an email 4 days later telling me its actually out of stock and will be available too me in a week or more so that means its gonna be easily two weeks before i get the item i ordered and you have to pay extra for postage aswell which is also really annoying.


 
Posted : 11/10/2010 12:28 pm
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Subject matter ultimately insignificant = +3
Lack of swear filter avoidance = -1
Run on sentence = +1
Capital letter at start = -1
Use of 'teh', 'too' instead of 'to', 'cyclin' and 'by' instead of 'buy' = +2
Lack of pictures = -1

Total: 3/10


 
Posted : 11/10/2010 12:39 pm
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you missed: too its i aswell instock


 
Posted : 11/10/2010 12:43 pm
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Not great but its probably my first effort at this sort of thing and I was perhaps a bit to aware of what I was typing, i should have done it just after the red mist had descended.

Now I know the scoring criteria, I'll aim to hit all of the targets next time.


 
Posted : 11/10/2010 1:02 pm
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Totally agree.. I've had this happen twice

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Posted : 11/10/2010 1:05 pm
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you missed: too its i aswell instock

My mistake.

Use of 'teh', 'too' instead of 'to', 'cyclin' and 'by' instead of 'buy', 'aswell', 'instock', 'its' = +3

Total: 4/10 ... not bad for a first effort!
You missed an easy bonus point by not including any ranDOM CAPSLOCk.


 
Posted : 11/10/2010 1:12 pm
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Apparently Rutland Cycles sorted out all their online stock issues last year, so you must be making the problem up.

...or they could just be lying.


 
Posted : 11/10/2010 1:17 pm