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I have filmed a short video of myself riding a local trail, and would just like some general feedback.
I know the quality may not be great but its a starting point, I hope you enjoy it!

http://www.pinkbike.com/video/160872/
Thanks

Any feed back or questions are welcome.....


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:16 pm
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Promised little, delivered less. Don't give up the day job.


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:19 pm
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Why the full face and big bike?

Thought the editing was ok and the quality seemed pretty good.


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:23 pm
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It reminded me that backpacks can ruck up your t-shirt exposing soft flabby unsightly flesh, but looks like you had fun, so that's the most important thing 🙂


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:25 pm
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more jumps and drops please.


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:30 pm
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Too much turquoise 😆


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:31 pm
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in the process of building up a large kicker, step down and double, so it will be all up and going shortly 🙂


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:32 pm
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forget all the pish at the start, its been done to death, people walking out their house or pushing a bike up to a trail and find more interesting trails.


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:32 pm
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nice


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:34 pm
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Aye, nicely done.


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:42 pm
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nicely filmed and edited. well lit too, was lots of it filmed at dawn? too many home movies, are on shoddy cameras.

bit more riding in the next one, please. 🙂


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:42 pm
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I think that looks good actually- really stylish.

Like thomthumb says- wang in a bit more riding and perhaps some slightly gnarlier tracks and it'll be great!


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:47 pm
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One tiny picky little word for you.
Preview. 🙂


 
Posted : 15/10/2010 11:47 pm
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Considering it was all your own work, that was good. It also takes some courage to allow STW to critique you vid.
Only let down by the location.


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 6:34 am
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As above - dull intro but good quality and shot angles once you got going. Looking forward to seeing more.

Excellent work fella [img] /happy-smiley-541.gif[/img]


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 7:13 am
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I like it. Nice bike too.


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 7:39 am
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nice editing work, you just need a better trail to ride


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 9:22 am
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That was nice mate, I liked the shot angles and the music worked well too IMO.


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 10:09 am
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great video and editing skills there and good quality too! hit the bigger trails with the big bike and it'll be great!


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 10:16 am
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nice wee film,add a gorrila tripod (£6 on ebay) to your film kit and do some branch shots higher up would be good,higher you go the longer clips you can fit in...good editing 😮


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 10:31 am
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not bad.

What camera did you use?


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 10:46 am
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Wasnt very exiting,but did,nt look like you had much of a trail to play with,the look of it was good tho,you are getting out there and doing it and thats the main thing right!!


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 10:59 am
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sok


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 11:14 am
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Yeah, was ok, I've seen worse, only bit I object to is the walking bit, didn't look steep enough to have to walk it could've rode up that surely, or maybe you need to add some MBUK/MBR type extreme camera angles to fool us on those bits.


 
Posted : 16/10/2010 11:27 am
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cheers guys, i did use a gorilla pod and some of the shots were about 10ft high in a tree.

I used a flip video ultra, and i will be moving onto a bigger camera soon as i am gonna make the filming and editing my second hobby 🙂


 
Posted : 17/10/2010 10:36 am
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[url= http://www.singletrackworld.com/forum/topic/america-in-england-a-bike-preview ]Hasn't this been done before....[/url] by you???


 
Posted : 17/10/2010 10:40 am