Ok, after several modifications think it is getting close, pizza hut is staying as there is no point confusing the issue, it says pizza hut in my ref and on my cv so whats the point of trying to kid them.
Dear Mr R, Metters
I am writing to apply for the position of graduate geotechnical engineer, as advertised on your website and have enclosed my curriculum vitae (CV) for your information. I have a range of experience which I feel makes me suitable for this position and have highlighted a few points from my CV that I feel are relevant to the position.
As you know I did a short work placement with G.E.M.S. three years ago, helping to input data and compile geotechnical reports. I am familiar with office procedures and enjoyed the positive working atmosphere. Having gained onsite experience with Costain, organising matters of health and safety, carrying out quality control checks, and managing resources, including onsite labour, as well as my academic qualifications, I am sure I have a lot to offer the company in a permanent position.
Although not a direct geotechnical engineering course I feel that certain units in my civil engineering course are relevant, including geology, soil mechanics, and geotechnical engineering which have given me experience in soil sampling, cone penetration testing and laboratory testing as well as foundation design and soil strength calculations. I believe these units make a good foundation for the work required by your company.
Currently I am working at Pizza Hut and although I consider it a temporary position whilst at university, I like to think that I have made the most of my time there taking on extra responsibilities including training new team members and undergoing management training. This, along with my part time security work running numerous taxi ranks, and street marshalling pilot schemes in and around the Bath and Bristol area, has helped me to develop my team working and time management skills. With these added responsibilities I feel that I have matured as a person and (I’m) I am much more focussed to follow my real vocation of a career in engineering once I graduate in June this year.
I look forward to your reply and of course would welcome the chance to come to interview.
Yours sincerely,
Ian Pinder.