just watched your vid composite – great work.
from my very novice view:
loved the soundtrack, very well matched to the vid. melodic and soulful, good beat
i also really like the split screen stuff, although i agree less would be more. totally see why you did it though as it takes practice to get it right! loved the transition at 1min too – looked slick.
again the multiple angles worked well but maybe a bit too many but again you need to experiment. one thing i definitely noticed while making my vid was the lack of viewpoints. if i’m going to make a “good ” vid i’ll have to put lots more thought into the camerawork than simply wearing the chest mount and riding around.
i’ve also noticed my chest footage can make people feel seasick 🙂 move around far too much!
good vid though mate, i liked it 🙂