Final cut is easier than the more recent imovie!
Notes on the video – Establishing shots in the car – too many.
I’d make my clips shorter and cut quicker. eg clip 1,2,3,4,2,2,3,4 cut 3,2,3,4,2,3,4 cut and so on.
Other advice
Cutting to the musical phrases and beats help to keep up the pace.
Synching up a landing with a drum hit for example or a climb/jump with a synth key change.
Close ups, cutaways and other things of note all add interest.
Tell a story.
Break the rules as you see fit.