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  • Twitter to Hemmingway
  • CharlieMungus
    Free Member

    Seeing the 140 character stories in the Sat Guardian and thinking of Hemmingways 5 word story. I thought we could try a new game.
    Each post a story but with one less character than the one before. That includes spaces.

    Wanna play? Next post will be my 140 character opener

    Be nice

    CharlieMungus
    Free Member

    I woke, a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small voice spoke “Are you Mummy’s friend?”, “No” I say “Not any more”.

    bearnecessities
    Full Member

    This won’t go well, but heck.

    I woke, a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small vice spoke “Are you Mummy’s friend?”, “No” I say “Not any more”.

    RustySpanner
    Full Member

    I woke, a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small vice spoke “Are you Mummy’s fiend?”, “No” I say “Not any more”.

    or

    They really did look like ants from the clocktower.
    The telescopic sight was a mistake. Too much perspective.
    Bollocks to it. Maybe tomorrow.

    fervouredimage
    Free Member

    I woke a body beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small vice spoke “Are you Mummy’s fiend?”, “No” I say “Not any more”.

    CharlieMungus
    Free Member

    Actually, i meant for you to write a new story, but this might work!

    RustySpanner
    Full Member

    I did!
    But 138, instead of 137 if you take out the unecessary space. 🙁

    Will try again later.

    mulacs
    Full Member

    I woke a boy beside me, my arm pinned and numb. As I crept out, a small vice spoke “Are you Mummy’s fiend?”, “No” I say “Not any more”

    bearnecessities
    Full Member

    Oh dear…collective fail!

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