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  • One for the language pedants
  • marcus
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    I’ve never been the best at written English and would appreciate help with the following:- Should the sentance read:

    A group of buildings was present (single group but plural buildings) or
    A group of buildings were present ?

    Ta

    mrsflash
    Free Member

    was

    Pook
    Full Member

    was

    “sentence”

    theflatboy
    Free Member

    sentence. and was.

    Dorset_Knob
    Free Member

    I think it should be ‘was’: a group was present.

    But it might be tautological to say that a group of buildings was present. If they weren’t present, they wouldn’t be buildings … how about ‘there was a group of buildings’?

    nickc
    Full Member

    Dorset knob has it.

    BigDummy
    Free Member

    Agreed with Dorset-Knob.

    Or ditch the “group”, as it isn’t clear it’s adding anything to the plural. “Buildings were present” if you must use the passive.

    Dorset_Knob
    Free Member

    Or ditch the “group”, as it isn’t clear it’s adding anything to the plural

    That’s a good point. If the fact that the buildings formed a group is relevant, leave it in.

    But if it’s coincidental, you could just say ‘There were some buildings’, which implies that they’re grouped anyway.

    So now it’s easier to talk about why the buidlings are important: ‘There were some buildings, which … ‘ and then go on to finish the sentence.

    … then write it out a hundred times before dawn.

    BigDummy
    Free Member

    “Some buildings were grouped around…”?

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