righog
a few pointers, you dont need the very low branches, seems you rwire is too thin for the thickness of branch you are bending, try to get all the wires running the same way, you have a lot in the upper section that are crossing
the pine is quite coarse in habit, at thos time oyu need to reduce the length of the new candles by breaking them over in half to keep it compact.
see how you go – at least you have had a bash, and hopefully enjoyed doing the styling, its not the best time of year to have potted the tree, as its in active growth at the moment, but hopefully you will get away with it, bonsai is about patience often, and not rushing things
of course you know where I am, if you visit my nursery – bring the tree, I can give you a few more pointers