Maybe it’s just me but I thought it was incredibly poor, obviously it’s a matter of personal taste but it was like reading a spectrum adventure game:
wait (time passes)
search (you found food)
S (you go south)
Then it just dribbles out at the end, as if he just gets fed up of it and can’t be bothered to write wait, search, south again.
Some of the writing is very elegant, but the plotting, the threadbare characters, the uninpsired post-apocalyptic landscape, the repetition, all left me completely cold. And when I consider how short it is (the publishers of my edition use a large font and huge borders and it’s still pretty anorexic) and how much of the text is spent describing drinking water or eating beans…